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Tuesday 30 October 2018

The Three Little Pigs- Fairytale

We are writing a narrative fairytale. We have 5 parts to write as class. As a class we are now on the second  part. The 5 parts are called TOPES= Topic, Orientation, Problem, Explanation and Solution. this is what I did for Orientation.



Orientation: Welcome! This is the place where fairy tales get real. Once upon a time there lived three little pigs. They were brothers, who lived with their widowed mother. In the dark, scary village they lived alone, just the three little pigs with their mother. They were named Happy, Neeko and Lucky. The moved away from their mother Jane to be independent. Happy made his house with straws, Neeko made his house with sticks and Lucky made his house with bricks. There was danger surrounding where the pigs built their house. They can be eaten or killed. The three little pigs did not know anything about the danger around them.
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Problem:  One day Happy went to fetch some water from the well while Neeko and Lucky were washing their clothes in the river. While Happy was fetching water, A voice came from in the middle of nowhere. “Hello”, it said. Happy struggled to look for the the person.

Happy went back. Boom! A wolf appeared in front of him. Happy jumped back in fear. “Don’t worry I’m your friend” said the wolf. But Happy remembered what his mother had said “don’t talk to strangers until and unless they need help”. “No” said Happy “I can’t trust strangers. Please go away”.

Unhappy by th reply from the pig, the wolf called his family “come your lunch is served” he said. Suddenly a flock of wolves appeared right before his eyes. Scared of the wolves Happy ran to his house. He ran past his brothers shouting “if you want to be alive run and hide inside you houses!”. The brothers left everything and ran for their lives
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1 comment:

  1. Lovely start Wajihah! I am excited to read the rest of your story about Lucky, Happy and Neeko.

    Great commitment during writing time to get this finished!
    - Miss Birtch

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